Re: Pu'in Shinsi

[Muffins]

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[atrb=bgcolor,b9cde1]	[atrb=bgcolor,76b3dd]	[atrb=bgcolor,0091d9]	[atrb=width,90][atrb=vAlign,bottom][atrb=bgcolor,0863bd]
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[cs=3][atrb=vAlign,top][atrb=bgcolor,070707][atrb=width,300][atrb=style, padding: 5px 10px 5px 10px; color:eeeeee; font-family:arial;][style=font-size:10px; text-align:justify;] ESTIMATED HEIGHT - 5'11" ESTIMATED WEIGHT - 170 lbs EYE COLOR - Deep Blue BUILD - Thin | Athletic HAIR COLOR - Light Brown HAIR STYLE - Short-Mid APPEARANCE - 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 While Shinsi is indeed a vizard with a very unique wardrobe and personality. He does not forgo wearing the traditional shinigami’s robe. Underneath the loose clothing Shinsi wears a black, skin-tight suit of under armor that covers every inch of his body except for his head. This suit comes up the vizard’s neck and forms around each of his fingers. The suit is very stretchy and the only way to get in and out of it is through the neck-hole at the top. Most of the suit cannot be seen, however, since Shinsi wears his other robes over it. The body-suit breathes very well, and liquid can pass through it freely if he is ever submerged in water. The material is capable of keeping Shinsi warm in cold temperatures while the suit’s porous exterior allows his body to breathe in hotter temperatures. It is a very practical addition to the soul reaper’s wardrobe. On the vizard’s feet he wears a pair of plain, straw sandals. They allow Shinsi for swift and agile running while maintaining a quiet sound. Hidden within the soles of of his sandals, Shinsi keeps two tiny needles, capable of piercing small weak spots or delivering some type of poison to his opponent. The dull ends of these needles poke out of the back of his soles, near his heel. He can pull the needles out at a moment’s notice and is quite skilled at throwing such small projectiles. The needles are about two inches long and each made out of steel. They are both dull on one end and sharp on the other. Shinsi’s shinigami robe and haori remain unchanged for the most part. He wears the typical black pants and matching robe on top with a white sash across his waist. The loose sleeves of his robe have white trim along with the pant leg holes that surround his ankles. His haori rests on top of his typical shinigami robes and makes up the third layer of Shinsi’s outfit. It is sleeveless like many of the other vizard’s haori and possesses his squad’s emblem on the back of it. Shinsi’s haori never seems to touch the floor as he fights unless he drops low to the ground. It always seems to remain a few centimeters off of the ground as he preforms all sorts of different maneuvers and never seems to get in the way of his swings and acrobatics. When Shinsi walks, his haori flaps rhythmically behind him without a sound, almost like a ghost’s cloak. The most unique portion of the vizard’s wardrobe though are what he chooses to wear on his head. Over his eyes the shinigami chooses to adorn himself with a dark purple visor that covers his eyes and hides them completely from anyone looking at him. The outside of the visor’s lens is very reflective, and causes one to be able to see their own reflection in the soul reaper’s eye gear. His visor is very effective at reflecting bright lights and keeping his eyes protected from shrapnel and any other threats to his vision. The neat thing about the visor though is that it doesn’t protect his eyes from bright light by making everything he sees darker. Rather, its reflective qualities simply keep an excess of light from reaching his eyes. This causes his vision to appear close to its actual brightness, and dulls extremely bright lights directed at his reflective visor. Not only does Shinsi wear something that covers his eyes, but his ears are also covered by a wireless, headphone-like device. The headphones are purple like his visor, and are connected together behind Shinsi’s neck. The earphones possess am airtight rubber coating around its electrical components making them completely waterproof and protected from electrical surges. Both the earphones and the visor are very durable as they’re able to sustain a solid punch without so much as cracking. On the vizard’s back, Shinsi keeps his zanpakutou sheathed so that it is drawn over his left shoulder. The sheath in which the sword rests in is rather big due to the size of his large zanpakutou. On the side of the sheath the characters for “Blood” “Sweat” and “Guts” are written in yellow down the side of it. The end of the sheath is sharp and has a sharp, golden tip that runs all the way up the edge of the sheath to the top where it encircles the opening with the elegant design of a serpent devouring its own tail with emeralds for eyes. The part of the sheath that isn’t adorned with gold is made from the traditional black wood that other sheaths are made out of. Shinsi possesses a slender build with very pale skin due to him wearing the suit practically 24-7. His loose clothing hides the fact he appears so slender, but that’s not to say he lacks power. Because of how thin he is, it is easy to see the muscles that he does possess. Shinsi has a well-developed body even though he could be labeled as skinny. The shinigami’s abs and chest are defined well and his arms possess curves from the bulges of his muscles. Shinsi’s skin is free of wrinkles, acne, and scars as he takes great care of his physical appearance. He has practically no body hair and growing facial hair is practically impossible for him. The shinigami’s face appears very boyish and people can tell that he looks young even with his face covered by the visor. Shinsi’s chin is pointed and defines his jaw very attractively. His eyebrows are thin and expressive; and they are the same color as the hair on his head. His nose is small, which simply adds more youthful features to his boyish face. The shinigami’s eyes are dark green and very expressive. His irises and pupils seem to shrink and expand depending on his mood. For example, when Shinsi is surprised his eyes widen as his pupils and irises shrink down to small dots. The vizard’s eyes are very important in getting his emotions across to others. Unfortunately his eyes are typically shielded behind his visor and one must interpret the movements of his eyebrows and mouth to gauge his mood. There isn’t much to say about Shinsi’s mouth other then he keeps his teeth very clean and his breath fresh. The vizard’s physical appearance is as important to him as smelling nice is. The vizard’s breath always smells minty fresh and he never possesses any body odor except immediately following rigorous exercise. As for Shinsi’s voice, it is calm and soothing. One could describe his voice as buttery, or charming. It is neither high or low and sounds like it belongs on the radio. The vizard’s hair is a light brown color and very shiny due to his good grooming habits. Shinsi’s medium-length hair is very soft and can be styled differently with ease. Shinsi, however, has taken to wearing his brown hair so that his long bangs reach down in thin streaks over his face. The rest of his hair is slicked back and runs down his neck naturally. Shinsi’s hair is just long enough to run halfway down the back of his neck in a mullet-like fashion.[/style]	[atrb=width,90][atrb=vAlign,bottom][atrb=bgcolor,0863bd]
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[cs=3][atrb=vAlign,top][atrb=bgcolor,070707][atrb=width,300][atrb=style, padding: 5px 10px 5px 10px; color:eeeeee; font-family:arial;][style=font-size:10px; text-align:justify;]BIRTH PLACE - EAST Rukongai, Shin'en District #12 CURRENT RESIDENCE - Karakura Town ALIGNMENT - True Nuetral PERSONALITY - Dislikes: Clowns - They are creepy and weird and ugly. Not only do they look insane, but they act insane and they are evil and smell bad. Hollow - They don’t have any regard for... well... anything... They don’t really think and just get in the way of more important business. Sweaters - They’re scratchy and and stuffy and gross... What more to say? Also they look really corny and they aren’t exactly my style. Putting trust in others - I know exactly what people are capable of. Because of this, I know you can’t trust anyone but yourself. I hate putting my faith in others because it’s a gamble. Weak people - It’s not fun beating the snot out of weaklings. It’s just... embarrassing. I’d rather have a nice, even match with an unknown outcome. Those are fun. Old people - They smell gross, look gross, and don’t make any sense. They talk forever about nothing and fall asleep at the worst times. Sometimes they even shit their pants in their sleep. That’s totally not cool. Lady GaGa - Everything she stands for is an absolute abomination. This bitch wore a dress made out of meat. MEAT!!! You HAVE to have mental illness to do something like that. Her music is ALRIGHT at best, but she is just a whack job... I can see why queers like her so much... Being dirty - It’s gross and makes you look disheveled. It is my experience that outward appearance is very important when gaining someone’s trust and friendship. Perhaps it is just a leftover pet-peeve of mine from when having someone’s trust meant the difference between getting my next meal and not. Chick flicks - They are all the same. You can tell from the very beginning what is basically going to happen. If it’s a chick flick that’s supposed to make you sad, then the guy she loves is probably going to die or they won’t end up together for some reason. If it’s a feel-good movie, then the main girl and the main guy will end up together. There, I just described the plot of every chick flick ever made... The Twilight Saga - I don’t read books much, but I know shit when I see it. Stephanie Meyer is probably the worst writer to have ever written. Shakespeare is rolling over in his gShinsi thanks to your shitty, sparkly vampire romance novels. Sour foods - How can you even eat sour things? Take lemons for example. There is no way people can eat lemons like oranges. They’re too sour to even choke down. Vegetarians - What’s wrong with eating a little meat? Vegans need to get over themselves and be willing to kill a few animals for the purpose of eating. I mean seriously, bacon is so good... Spending money - I know it’s often necessary, but I really hate doing it. I like money. I REALLY like money, and losing money is a bad thing. I try to avoid spending cash whenever possible. Kissing - Well, it spreads diseases like mono and herpes simplex, and it’s basically like sharing spit. I will never get used to it no matter how many times I have to do it. I’d rather my tongue stayed inside my own mouth, not some other, dirtier one... Likes: Women - They don’t run my life, but hey... They give me what I want, I give them what they want. It’s an equal trade. Let’s not go any further into my exploits, eh? Making friends - The relationship between friends is a strong one, and one that I can abuse quite easily if need be. With friendship comes trust, and trust is a valuable thing. If you have someone’s trust then you control them, and you never know when you need to be able to control people. Money - Money is what makes the world go round and I hope to collect as much of it as I can. You can buy everything with money, and everything is my favorite thing to buy! Technology - The things that modern technology can do are amazing! Did you know you can listen to any song you want at any time with a simple press of a button? That is totally cool! Mushrooms - They are the most delicious vegetable. It’s surprising that such a delicacy is actually a fungus. Imagine that! Fungus is practically a synonym for “disgusting” yet mushrooms are really good! My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic - Okay, I don’t even know why, but this show is awesome. Even if it’s made for little girls. It feels like it was made for the manliest of men. I don’t even know how to explain it. Just watch the first episode. You’ll be hooked, I promise. Beef - Beef is a man’s meat. There is nothing that screams “Man” like devouring on a rare, juicy steak. Techno - What’s not to like about techno music? You have amazing tunes and awesome beats. It just makes you want to dance all night and party all day. White and purple - White and purple are my two favorite colors. Not much else to it. I could go into detail about WHY they’re my favorite colors or I could just say that I like them for the same reason you like your favorite colors. They are visually appealing to me. Simple as that. Video games - I may be one of the only shinigami with a game console in my room. There’s nothing better at 3 in the morning then playing some xbox while blasting techno through the whole barracks for all to hear. I wonder if it annoys them? Nah... No one could possibly get annoyed at my excellent musical taste. Shinigami - Well... I’m a shinigami; and I like me. It makes sense that I’d prefer my own race over the alternative. I don’t like ALL shinigami, but what soul society stands for as a whole just makes more sense then what the hollows are trying to establish. Dogs - What’s not to like about dogs? They’re a shinigami’s best friend! They’re loyal, selfless, forgiving, and they’ll love you no matter what. Dogs are better then most people I’ve met. Kidou - If I can fight someone without getting my hands dirty that is most preferable method. Have you seen the kidou they’ve invented? They’re pretty awesome! Staying up really late - Sleep is for the weak! I do not need sleep, for I am above sleep and sleep is below me! Besides, I have better ways to spend my time than sleeping. Gum - Gum is a very enjoyable thing to chew when one has nothing better to do. My favorite flavors are wintergreen, original, and watermelon. I’ve gotten quite skilled at blowing bubbles with gum too. Humans sure do invent some neat things. Shinsis - Well, I like Shinsis... That's kindof why I chose it as my alias. I am a master at doing the Melbourne Shuffle, The Spongebob, The Running Man, and almost every other type of dance that one sees at those loud, drug-filled techno parties. Ya know, I'm quite famous on earth on the hardstyle scene because I tear it up on the dance floor when I'm in a gigai. Flaws: Paranoid - Because of his life as a conman, Shinsi knows what people are capable of doing simply to get what they want. It is because of his own sins that the captain has trouble trusting people. He will always question what the other people are hoping to get out of helping him or what the true motivation behind selfless actions might be. Gets drunk extremely quickly - Shinsi cannot hold his alcohol at all. One drink is enough to get him shit-faced or wasted. He isn’t a quiet drunk either. When Shinsi is drunk he gets loud, rowdy, angry, and happy all at the same time. It is impossible for Shinsi not to make a complete fool of himself when he’s drunk. Manipulative - Shinsi, being an ex-conman, is naturally very manipulative. Often he’ll catch himself in the middle of trying to coax someone to do something and realize that he’s not behaving how a captain should. Shinsi has a silver tongue, and it has the potential to ruin many lives as it did in the past. He tries his best not to fall into old, bad habits again. Allergic to animal fur - When he’s in the presence of animal fur Shinsi will begin to sneeze often and get a stuffy nose. This is very annoying and distracting for him. Terrible with kids - For some reason Shinsi’s charms don’t seem to work on little kids and they all cry and run away in his presence. Shinsi, aware of this weakness, acts hesitant around little kids and will often seem nervous in the presence of children. Protective of his looks - Shinsi is the type of person that knows his looks are very important to get what he wants. People naturally trust good looking people more than ugly people, and because of this Shinsi is the type of person to especially avoid being hit in the face or doing anything that might be come with any risk of ruining his face. Habits: Shinsi unconsciously adjusts his visor a lot when talking to people. It is done in much the same way as people adjust their glasses. However, Shinsi does it primarily when he’s trying to manipulate someone. It is not something that’s very noticeable, and only people who spend a considerable amount of time with Shinsi would pick up on this nervous habit of his, but it’s one of the only clues that people have to tell when he is probably trying to manipulate them. This is not to say that every time Shinsi adjusts his visor he is trying to manipulate someone, just most of the time. The captain often pries at people to get them to talk about themselves. The captain likes it when people are talking about their own past and experiences because it gives him something to work with. Shinsi likes getting in people’s heads and messing them up mentally. Shinsi often speaks in slang, using words like “Sup,” “Pimpin,” or “Dude” in his everyday vocabulary. It’s just something the captain picked up during one of his frequent trips to the human world. Shinsi is a master of shattering a stressful mood with the lighthearted banter. This however comes with the opposite effect of making him sound incredibly sinister whenever he chooses to get serious and abstain from using such words. Shinsi, being a slight germaphobe, has a habit of wiping his hands on his robes after he’s touched things such as other people’s hands or door handles. It is less out of actual fear and more out of compulsion at this point. Fears: Shinsi hates clowns because of how creepy they are. He’s not deathly afraid of them, but whenever he’s around a clown, Shinsi becomes obviously uncomfortable. The captain isn’t sure what exactly puts him on edge, but he’s pretty sure that it’s the makeup, the crazy demeanor, and the god-awful red noses. Shinsi fears the concept of aging. He doesn’t want to get old and feeble. The worst part about aging, in Shinsi’s opinion, is becoming wrinkly, ugly, and gross. The captain doesn’t like to be around old people because they remind him of what will happen to him some day. Shinsi is quite a germaphobe, which causes him to act a little bit different than many shinigami. For example, he always carries around his own set of chopsticks and disinfecting wipes in case he might need them. Shinsi hates being dirty which is one reason why he compulsively wears the full-body under armor suit. So he doesn’t have to touch things directly. Goals: Shinsi’s only goal in life is to acquire as much monetary success as possible. He wants money, he wants recognition, and he wants women. It is truly a greedy ambition, but the only one Shinsi is really looking out for is himself. Shinsi simply wants to ensure he has more then enough to be certain that he can survive both comfortably and independently. It is this same greed that led him to be a conman so many years ago. Now that he’s served his time, Shinsi has decided to take the more legal approach to reaching his goal. Alignment: True Neutral Overall Personality: Shinsi is, at first impression, a very upstanding, dependable man with an extremely attractive personality. There is no doubt that the captain is an expert in social situations and he is more than capable of picking up on slight behavioral queues that hint to someone’s true feelings. Because of all this, Shinsi comes off as very likable and fun to be around. This is done with the intention of making as many friends and allies as possible because Shinsi is well aware that having positive relationships with people is advantageous at times. Because of his history as an conman, the shinigami feels more comfortable as more people trust him. He may never actually abuse a person’s trust, or he may at some point. Either way, Shinsi likes having people’s trust out of sheer habit and self-validation. Even if someone trusts Shinsi with all their heart, there is a good chance that he doesn’t trust them at all. The shinigami recalls what terrible things people can do to abuse trust by simply remembering the things he did to people in his past. Because of this he constantly questions people’s motives and never takes anyone’s word for truth without investigating their points very carefully. The only people Shinsi may actually be willing to become true friends with are people that know what crimes he’s committed and accept him regardless. The ex-captain of Squad 8, Ranmyaku Youmei, was one of Shinsi’s one true friends who he’d met while serving time in the Maggot’s Nest. Shinsi is values his visual appearance very highly and grooms himself almost obsessively. It is perhaps this aspect of his personality that led Shinsi to become a germaphobe. He hates dirt in all its forms and abhors getting dirty in any way because of the amount of work he puts into his visual appearance. This has escalated to the point where Shinsi simply avoids doing anything that might put him at risk of contact with germs. He carries his own set of chopsticks around with him in case he needs to eat something and disinfecting wipes for every other situation. He doesn’t outwardly make a big deal out of germs things because he knows that everyone isn’t as big a germaphobe as him, so he tries his best to downplay this fear and be subtle about it. It is important for Shinsi that he doesn’t negatively stick out too much when compared other shinigami. Shinsi is a naturally, fun-loving guy who loves many vices that afflict humanity. Shinsi is not without sexual drive and pursues carnal relationships with attractive members of the opposite sex very successfully. However, when he does this it is less out of lust and more out of greed. Shinsi is a very greedy individual who naturally hoards both money, valuable items, and women. Shinsi likes to take things, and women register on his radar as something with value. This incredible greed is hidden well by the captain and was the initial reason why Shinsi stooped to a life of crime. Shinsi loves to party, but avoids drugs and alcohol for the same reason he avoids germs. He is not a fan of getting stoned or drunk because it makes him look like a blabbering idiot, and that is not acceptable. Even without such substances, Shinsi still manages to party hard with his energetic attitude and sick dance moves. When by himself, Shinsi enjoys more solitary hobbies such as video games and making his own techno music on his computer. Oh, that’s another thing about Shinsi. He loves technology a lot. Technology is just about the only thing that Shinsi is willing to part with money over. He loves tinkering with electronics and taking them apart and putting them back together. Because of his interest, Shinsi is quite handy with fixing, repairing, and even building complex electronics. Overall, Shinsi is a self-centered shinigami with only his own goals in mind. This, however, requires him to be friendly and make as many friends as he can in hopes that it ends in his own benefit. He regulates his appearance very strictly, hoping that it may win him the approval of people he meets. He trusts no one, but acts as if he does to strengthen the belief of those who do trust him. He is paranoid and greedy with aspirations to acquire as much monetary wealth as he can during his lifetime. He is also very knowledgable when it comes to electronics and loves to party. As if his manipulative nature and like-ability didn’t make Shinsi enough of a smooth talker, the ex-con man has become extremely skilled in the realm of psychology. Shinsi is able to pick up on minor queues in people’s behavior to the point where he can determine with high accuracy whether someone is lying or not. One should not allow Shinsi to get to know too much about them, because once Shinsi is inside your head, he can really attack you emotionally. He can figure out what person’s insecurities and fears are quicker than any captain with a mere conversation. The captain is so knowledgable in the field, due to his time as a con-man, that he is capable of baffling the most studious doctors of the field. There is no doubt that Shinsi’s mind is one of his most powerful weapons. [/style]	[atrb=width,90][atrb=vAlign,bottom][atrb=bgcolor,0863bd]
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[Muffins]

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[atrb=bgcolor,b9cde1]	[atrb=bgcolor,76b3dd]	[atrb=bgcolor,0091d9]	[atrb=width,90][atrb=vAlign,bottom][atrb=bgcolor,0863bd]
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[cs=3][atrb=vAlign,top][atrb=bgcolor,eeeeee][atrb=width,250][atrb=style, padding: 5px 10px 0px 10px; color:070707; font-family:arial;][style=font-size:10px; text-align:justify;] Human Life (1644) Bario and Yura lived in Whiskey Peak as blacksmith shopkeepers. They dealt in all kinds of arms, from cannons to swords, guns to hammers. The Gerad’s were known as the some of the best metalworkers known to the Grand Line. They showed no favorites, be they bounty hunter, marine or pirate. Charged the same price for everything and never cheated anyone. Their works were always top of the line. Some even say they have made weapons for high bounty pirates as well. But all this praise is for naught. Bario and Yura were no interesting people; they had talent so they used it. They knew how to smith weapons and they prided on their creations. They were a humble couple, but well respected and loved throughout Cactus Island. Yura gave birth to her first son, Bario Jr., who grew into their love of metalworking as much as they loved it. He was not very talented in creation, but he was brilliant when it came to refining, making even the dullest blade sharpened to life. Bario was twelve when tragedy struck. His mother, pregnant with a soon to be sibling, fell ill suddenly. It took a toll on her and when his little brother was born, and she was left with little strength after his birth. She asked her eldest son and her husband to take great care of themselves. They asked her, what they should name the newborn she replied smiling, “Shinsi” Bario laughed noting the normality in the name, but it broke into tears as he watched his wife die. But that hardly broke the blacksmith family. Bario and Jr. went back to work hammering away at weapons at order. Jr. had much taken the place of his mother, spending every bit of time he could spare with his younger brother. They turned away help with the child, believing that they would persevere and strike onwards as a family. Because of this many family friends and customers gladly gave more than they normally would pay for workings and kept the family afloat on good will. As Shinsi Yu Gerad, or Shinsi for short, grew older he found himself unable to do well in the smith. He was not necessarily terrible at the job; he simply found no inspiration from working there. His father and brother did not shun him for it, as he was free to be whatever it was he was born to be. At age nine, Shinsi found himself unrivaled in accuracy with long range weapons. His childhood friends used to fling rocks with slingshots at empty bottles and he hit his every mark. It was one of these outings that brought him to his best friend. On his eleventh birthday he got into a gamble with a few of his slingshot rivals saying that he couldn’t hit a target 200 feet away. Shinsi boasted that not only could he do it, if they gave him one single day he could do it with a simple bow and arrow. The bet taken, Shinsi told his father, who crafted him a simple but no less amazing bow and a few arrows. He took one shot of the bow and grinned at his 100% accuracy. He could never miss, at least that’s what he believed. The next day he went out to the open field with his friends and rivals. The stage had already been setup for him: at the far end of the meadow was a fence with a single wooden plaque resting upon it. Shinsi took aim, and fired. The arrow flew and Shinsi took off after it. And when he got to the fence he found the arrow lodged two centimeters below the plaque. He fell to his knees not knowing how he could have missed. And then it hit him... he had never adjusted for the distance or for the weight of the arrow. It could never have hit dead on with just a straight path. Knowing he had lost he paid his gamble sighing. And from that moment on he knew what he was to be: a marksman. After his twelfth birthday and telling his father what he knew what he was good at, his father told him that the best thing to do would become a bounty hunter or a pirate. His father did not condone the acts of piracy but he would love his son all the same. His brother said that he might do well in the marines, but Shinsi shook his head. He was a gambler. He knew that he would not feel right upholding the law when he broke it. Around the same time Shinsi had also found an abandoned hawk nest. There had been a bad storm and the egg had been left behind or worse the parents had not made it through it. But Shinsi took it in all the same and named the chick Niche. Niche was a happy bird sitting in Shinsi’s hair comfortably ruffling her feathers. At age fifteen Shinsi’s somewhat straight arrow personality erupted. It was any ordinary day for him. He would go out to the fields and practice with Niche with his bow and arrow. He practiced sun up to sundown every day so on his eighteenth birthday Shinsi would be more than ready to take down pirates or any other bounties without mercy. He returned to the smith to see his brother on the floor unconscious outside the shop. Niche took flight over to her master’s brother and began pulling on his ear, a small prank that Shinsi had taught her to do to his older brother. Jr. slowly sat up, wakening and then his eyes went wide with fear. He and his little brother raced into the shop to see their father bleeding from the chest. Jr. went to him quickly trying as best he could to help the old man, but Bario pushed his son away. “Shinsi... the... box... underneath my... my work table... your... your 18th birthday present...” and the man spoke no more words. Jr. explained that two men, pirates, had come wanting to know the location of a gold. He did not know what it was, but Shinsi did. He went to the box and opened it to reveal the golden coins with a print in the middle. It looked much like a cog wheel. Shinsi did not even question it. His father had saved it all these years for him for some unknown reason but he would not squander the gift. He felt only... Only pure unadulterated hatred for all pirates. The pirates who attacked the smith were laying waste to the town. But high in the clock tower of the town Shinsi sat watching them. Glaring down at them. Crows flew over head crying loudly and then began making a circle around one. Shinsi leaped from his perched state landing in a bail of hey, but the pirate had already caught wind of him. Both drawing their swords nearly simultaneously, Shinsi leaped forward and aimed his sword right at the man who had faulted his smithery. *Chunkk* the sword flew through their skin, going akmost all the way through, a double standard, and he could only kill one. “I am sorry Bario. I truly am...” He felt himself buckling, as he fell to the ground and looked up at the setting sun once again. The sun lit the incoming night with a stain of red and orange. Shinsi felt a smile come across his lips to finally know his life was coming to an end. It was an awkward feeling, but he liked it. He felt like everything was ending. Shinsi looked at the red stained sky, with a smirk across his face as he passed away in the Human World. Soul Society- Rukongai District 293 (1662) Heaven? A male woke up in a strange bed that was not familiar to him. It was very uncomfortable, and he moved around, still feeling groggy from the sleep. He felt tired and just wanted to keep sleeping. Shinsi tried to get comfortable in this awkward bed and couldn't find a spot that kept him comfortable. He opened his eyes and looked around the room. It seemed there was everything in a small square space. There was a kitchen, bed, table, and other basic house appliances. Shinsi was confused as he looked around, for some reason he was confused and forgot everything. He didn't know where he was, who he was, and how he ended up here. It seemed like he was reborn into a new life or something, but he looked at his body. His body was fully grown, as if he had been living this life for the past two decades. This was really getting Shinsi confused, as he got up and walked out the cots front door. Many other small cots like the one h was in littered the area around them. It seemed the area he was in was very country-like, but it seems there was not much authority around. Shinsi watched as two boys fought each other and the winning boy taking the loser's bread. The male was too confused to react to this and just looked around. Then a boy that looked about in his teen years walked up to him. "Hey Shinsi!" the younger boy called out to him. "Who are you? Where am I?" he replied to the boy. Shinsi had to figure his situation out before going on with his life. It was way too confusing for him and he needed to clarify some things. "You're Shinsi, we named you Shinsi because your spiritual light was much brighter than others. You're in Soul Society; this is the life after death. 'Heaven' as many people in the Human World call it. But this place is nothing like Heaven," the boy explained, as he carried a small bag of skimped groceries. It was coincidental how his human world's name was the same as the one in Soul Society. "I'm Keitaro, this is my cot, I'm just trying to help you start your new life, so don't worry" the male assured Shinsi, as he followed Keitaro back into the cot. Shinsi sat on a chair across from Ketiaro. It was a small wooden table accompanied by two small wooden chairs. "So... explain to me, what is this all?" Shinsi asked, curious of this new experience he was gaining. "Also, why can't I remember anything if I'm supposed to be from the Human World?" "You're in Rukongai District 293, you're basically in the ghetto of Soul Society. There are four main sections of Soul Society, north, east, south, and west. There are 320 districts in total, eighty in each section of Soul Society. The numbers mean how many districts you are away from Seireitei. And Seireitei is the main "government" area of Soul Society. They help run this world and the Human World. They are called Shinigami," Keitaro explained, as he split a quarter of a bread with the hungry Shinsi. "So then, don't these Shinigami help us out? Why is this area so 'ghetto' as you say?" Shinsi asked, still trying to take in all the information. "As time goes by you'll get the hang of things. The Gotei 13, the governing body, has many important things to handle and believe that the rural, ghetto districts of Rukongai will never change. Besides, the Gotei 13 is only obsessed with finding possible Shinigami," Keitaro explained, not liking the Shinigami at all. Keitaro believed that the Gotei 13 did nothing to try and help the people of Soul Society. "Everyday will be a challenge to survive for you, Shinsi, this is a never-ending life and if you can't find a way out.... you're stuck! This is nothing like 'Heaven', the Human World would be much better than living in this dump!" Keitaro stressed, feeling his anger starting to rise. "I see, well then, we gotta do what we gotta do to survive, huh?" Shinsi said, as he smirked. It seemed this new life did not change Shinsi at all. He still loved to fight and it seemed like there were no barriers this time. It was lawless, he didn't know anyone, and it would be his main survival factors. Never-ending Years of Fighting Shinsi had not ceased fighting, as he lived his limitless life. He soon became one of the best fighters in his district. Shinsi would sometimes commit crimes against others for his own personal needs. Shinsi still lived with Keitaro, and they helped each other live. Keitaro was like Shinsi's angel, for he always helped and guarded him from doing unnecessary things. Shinsi sometimes wouldn't listen, but for the most part, he knew Keitaro was a good guy at heart. Shinsi was in a way getting tired of the same old rugged, thugs coming up to him and trying to fight him. He wanted to fight with stronger people, these rumored Shinigamis that rarely entered the ghetto districts. Shinsi talked to the local informant who gathered news from all over Soul Society. He was told that there was a small team of Shinigami passing through soon. Their mission was to stop some illegal activities in a farther district. But Shinsi decided that he would interfere with their plans momentarily and challenge them to a fight. Most Shinigami could easily defeat any spirits, so there were only two of them passing through. The informant had also notified that a high-seated officer would come as back up, in case of anything, so Shinsi would have to be careful. Shinsi's smirk didn't leave his face, as he stood at the end of the road leading to the next district. He saw two black-robed males with swords quickly drawn in front of him. They ordered him to move, but Shinsi only smirked as he got ready to fight them. He wondered how strong these guys were. He had been living in the same district for so many years and he had yet to see a Shinigami fight. He smirked, as he started dashed towards the one on the left. The male Shinigami went for a diagonal slash, which Shinsi stepped forward toward. This gave him no space between the two males and Shinsi took the chance to push him. He stumbled, as Shinsi punched him in the gut and sent him rolling on the ground. The second Shinigami attacked Shinsi, and Shinsi quickly blocked with his wrists. A small aura of reiatsu engulfed his arms as blood started to draw out from the shallow cut. Shinsi used his reiatsu without really knowing it as he blocked. He already had many scars from fighting other thugs with swords or any other weapons. Shinsi taught himself to use his reiatsu to block. Usually, Shinsi would have easily blocked a sword with no injuries, but the Shinigami was using reiatsu to attack also. Shinsi had no idea what this spiritual energy thing was, and simply thought this Shinigami was someone on his equal footing. The Shinigami started throwing slashes at Shinsi's body, creating cuts in his ragged white t-shirt. Blood started to seep out of the cuts he had gotten. Shinsi had blocked most of the slashes with his arms again, but it was getting much more difficult now that the first Shinigami got back up. The two Shinigami struck at Shinsi from two different angles. Shinsi responded quickly by raising his forearms to block the attacks. He could feel these slashes hurt him, as the swords carved into his skin deeper than before. Shinsi started to pant, feeling a loss of energy. His spiritual energy was flaring on and off, as he barely controlled them to help him protect him. Suddenly, a third Shinigami appeared in front of Shinsi. Blocking the other two Shinigamis that were about to attack him again. Everyone stopped to see this new Shinigami. "Another one?! More to fight!" he exclaimed, as he ran towards the new Shinigami that arrived. Shinsi attempted to knock him out with one hit, by aiming for his chin. The new Shinigami easily blocked his punch with a sheathed sword. Shinsi grunted, as the man spoke no words and watched Shinsi. "I am the Fourth Seating Officer of the Gotei 13 3rd Division, I ask of you peacefully to come with us," the Shinigami asked Shinsi. "I want you to join my Division, you have strong reiatsu!" The bleeding male agreed, seeing that he couldn't fight with them forever. It didn't seem like this officer wanted to fight with Shinsi anyways, so he would agree to follow the officer. He looked a little confused wondering how he would become a Shinigami. It was a mysterious area for him and he had no idea what Seireitei held for him. But Shinsi loved the idea of leaving the rural district and entering the unknown Seireitei. Road to Seireitei and the Blood Demon The Shinigami trio returned to Shinsi's district after finishing their duty. They went together through the many other districts and through some unknown terrain. It was actually a pleasant trip, since they had taught him how to use his reiatsu to help him run faster. He was a beginner and had no idea of what using his reiatsu was. They all traveled together one night through a dense forest. The seating officer had suggested that it would be faster and they would be able to make it to Seireitei before dawn. A voice spoke to Shinsi, it was deep and distant, but he could hear it. "Zanpakutou! Use reiatsu...." the ghastly voice whispered. Shinsi stopped and the Shinigamis turned around. "What's wrong, Shinsi?" the seating officer asked. It seemed there was a strange occurrence happening with Shinsi's reiatsu. The seating officer could sense the fluctuation of the reiatsu. "Zanpakutou... How do I make this zanpakutou??" Shinsi asked, as he felt something lurking in him. He knew for sure there was something that had awakened these last few days. The male stood there as he felt the confusion, yet something powerful in himself. Shinsi had no idea what this was, but he wanted it... badly. The male stared at the officer, he could see it in the officer's eyes. That man knew how to obtain this 'Zanpakutou'. "It's a difficult process... but if you can do it, then try..." the officer spoked. *** "KEEP HIM DOWN!" the officer yelled. The officer use the hilt of his zanpakutou to smash an odd hollow mask on Shinsi. The two lower rank Shinigami quickly held down Shinsi by his arms. "Calm down! We'll give you what you want! JUST COME WITH ME!" the officer stated strictly. Shinsi's hand gripped tightly onto a katana. The katana had a red silk-sewn hilt, with a dark silver guard, and the blade was a strong dark black steel color. It had a red outlining along with red going down the sharpened middle of the blade. His forearms were covered in a red reitasu as he struggled. Shinsi had little to no strength to resist two men on top of his arms. He had spent the whole night doing as the man had taught him. The officer's trick worked, but it had suddenly gave him a drive for blood. A drive for battle. He wanted to fight more people and it was the Zanpakutou's desires that Shinsi wanted to carry out. "Alright!" Shinsi agreed with a smirk on the side of his lips. Shinigami & Zanpakutou Gotei 13 3rd Division Shinigami Shinsi looked at the blacksmith in his barracks as he unwrapped some cloth. He unveiled two normal steel guards. The Shinigami took the blacksmith's item and slipped them on. He smirked; he liked how it fit perfectly. Shinsi made his hand into a fist and moved his fingers around. It was strong and flexible. He wanted to see how it would look with his sword. The eager male grabbed his sword and unsheathed it. In an instant the blade was horizontal in front of him. Suddenly, his steel guards started to be engulfed in red reiatsu. Shinsi's guard's steel changed colors similar to the blade's. It was dark black silver, and the biggest change was that it grew sharp claws. "It looks like your Zanpakutou took a liking to the guards and use it's reiatsu to take its own form," the smith suggested, not really seeing any other explanations. The black smith was surprised to see this himself and it wasn't everyday one of his works was turned into something more magnificent. Shinsi's face was accompanied with his notorious small smirk on the right side of his face. He looked at the blacksmith and looked back at his blade. The blade called to him again, this time it was saying something different. "I am Chi Akuryou! Know me well; this is where our journey begins!" a deep, sinister voice spoke in Shinsi's mind. "Chi Akuryou" Shinsi muttered, as he sheathed his sword. It took restrain and discipline to not fight this blacksmith. Shinsi walked out of the blacksmith's forge and smirked, feeling his new 'accessory' to killing. The male walked back to his 'room' and smirked. He had a lot more to go, he needed to get stronger. Shinsi felt the reiatsu of his zanpakutou almost strengthening him. He already had a plan in mind and it would take more years to accomplish it. It didn't matter to Shinsi, because he had a many years to prepare for it. The New Beginning Silence fell over the training area of the 3rd Division barracks. It was a stunning surprise, as the whole 3rd Division watched what had just happened. A low seating officer had just defeated the 3rd Division Captain. Shinsi had defeated his taichou and stood there with his blade covered in blood. His guards were covered in blood. Shinsi was covered in blood. He stood there with that same smirk on his face, as he whipped his sword towards the ground. The blood on the blade violently hit the ground. There were more than two hundred witnesses of the 3rd Division's Captain, and now Shinsi's goal was complete. After many years, he had finally defeated his Captain. It took many years to accomplish this, but he finally did it. Shinsi did it without even showing his Bankai. The Shinigami had to train for years without end as he trained himself to become strong enough to defeat a Captain with only his Shikai. "5th Seating Officer, Report this to the Gotei 13!" Shinsi boasted, as he started to walk away. "Tell them I'm going to need a new Taichou's uniform, the old one is too bloody," the male said followed by an unrestrained loud laughter. Decades passed as Shinsi remained the 3rd Division Captain. He stressed to all of his students of his division to become strong enough to overcome him one day. Shinsi only told them this, so his Division was the strongest. Plus, Shinsi loved the idea of having a challenger so frequently. Shinsi had changed the 'barbaric' views of the ruthless way to become Captain. The way Shinsi had become Captain. His Division was the only Division that looked at the most uncommon way to become Captain as acceptable. Shinsi stood in the middle of the training field of his barrack. He smirked once again as he stood at the same spot he had attained his title. Shinsi looked up to the sun that was rising; it stained a bright color in the sky. It was the color of a new day, a new beginning. 32 Years later- Mission: Top Secret Mission Number: 43 Code Name: Ringo Mission: Undercover Missing Shinigami Via District: 82 Mission Directive to: 3rd Division Shinsi Mission Cocnlusion: Shinsi was lost via Unknown battle with a being, the being was too strong, stronger then anyone expected, a new breed, the . All men Following Shinsi are also missing, No remnants of any bodys were found. Kido-Corps Agent was still alive during the first battle between Shinsi and Un-named being. Agent saw Shinsi Fall, but he was still alive when taken by the being. Another being then arrived and agent had no choice but to flee. Agent also noticed that the Second being took one of the others with him before disappearing. -The rest is classified- "What is this? What is on my f-face? What am I? Who are y-you?" Shinsi yelled out, "Why a-a-am i Here?" All he could feel was the solid object on his face, it had a straight beam coming out at the Chin, and another at the top of his face. There seemed to be two rectangular slits in front of his eyes, and One in front of his mouth. "What have i become?" Shinsi passed into Unconsciousness once more. "You are a Vizard."[/style]	[atrb=width,90][atrb=vAlign,bottom][atrb=bgcolor,0863bd]
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[Muffins]

Techniques:

Hoho:

Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash steps)
Type:
Base Level: 1
Current Level: 5
Level Cap: 99
Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time.
Effect: Allows the user to move 10 meters at near untraceable speeds, without taking up a movement. When first learned it can be used five times per battle. Each level learned adds 10 meters to the distance, and allows for 1 additional usage per battle.
Drawback: Overuse causes muscle failure that paralyzes the opponents legs for 2 turns. Cannot attack during shunpo.
Limit: Hoho.

Zanjutsu:

Senmaioroshi (千枚卸, "Thousand-Page Wholesale")
Type:
Base Level: 1
Current Level: 5
Level Cap: 5
Description: A technique where multiple blade movements take place so fast that they can literally shred a target into pieces. This technique focuses energy into a blade in order to temporarily increase its speed.
Effect: Causes one horizontal sword slash to become two. Can be used once per day when first learned. Each additional training increases the number of additional sword slashes created by 1, and increases the number of times it can be used per day by 1.
Drawback: None.
Limit: Zanjutsu




Shikai
Type: Release, Supplementary
Base Level: 5
Current Level: 10
Level Cap: 10
Description: The Shikai (始解, Initial Release) is the second form (or first "upgraded" form) available to a Zanpakutō. To activate it, the Shinigami needs to learn the name of their Zanpakutō. This is not as easy as simply picking a name, as the living spirit of the Zanpakutō already has its own name. Therefore, the Shinigami must be able to communicate and harmonize with their Zanpakutō effectively, which requires being able to speak to the spirit within its world. A Zanpakutō can change size and shape depending on the spiritual strength of the owner. Achievement of the Shikai is a mark of control of a Zanpakutō, most seated officers are capable of Shikai. It is also required in order to achieve the rank of lieutenant; as it is a requirement most captains look for. After first learning the Zanpakutō's name, the Shikai can be performed at will simply by speaking a command followed by the Zanpakutō's name. The commands vary between users and range from a simple imperative verb to a short poem. They often relate to the Zanpakutō's signature ability, or hint at the nature of its spirit. Gaining a Shikai grants the user a maximum of Four Shikai abilities.
Effect: Grants the user the ability to utilize their Shikai Abilities. Doubles user's base speed (doubles movements) and strength for the remainder of release when first learned. Each level afterwards increases the users strength and speed an additional 10%. Lasts for 5 turns when first learned. Each level afterwards increases this duration by 2 turns.
Drawback: None
Limit: Zanjutsu, Shinigami.




Shikai: Ripple
Type: Passive
Base Level: 1
Current Level: 10
Level Cap: 99
Description: Ripple the sword creates a ripple effect, every time the user moves a ripple like mirror bounces off of them, Like when a leaf hits water.
Effect: Causes a constant illusion that makes it extremely hard to find the user. This technique is good with high speed movements/sword movements for it is activated per movement. The move uses the own users reality to be expelled, like most shikai it is made of the users reiatsu. So even people who can sense reiatsu, they will still have a hard time finding the user. As for the ripple, they are spaced out (from the center (the hilt)) only 1/2 a centimeter and constantly increasing around the user until around a 20 meter radius at which point it dissipates. The ripple is ONLY in front of the user, like a 2-D wall but moves easily with the command of the user. After the technique Is used the user can quickly move away in any direction. It only lasts for 2 posts and can be used Twice per 3 posts. it's color is a transparent grey, the color of the users robes.
Drawback: While the user makes another attack, or is attacking, this move becomes null. So it is only good for initial distraction, then used in corrollation of Shunpo the user can make quick attacks that keep the opponent at bay. The stronger the opponents reiatsu sensing is, the easier it is to narrow down the users position.
Limit: Zanjutsu, Shinigami. Must have "Shikai" Technique.

Vizard:

[Naitome]

Let me preface this response by saying two things. First, good job on taking on the daunting task of writing a Main Character profile. Second, unlike many other site, I actually take the time to read everything that everyone writes, so this response may get a little long. Bear with me.

[/u]][/b] Applications for Vizards are closed. But since you seem to have put the time into this, i'll let it slide. This once. Anyone else who just up and creates a Main Character/Vizard/Restricted Character, do not expect this leniency. I'm going to go on the assumption that you spoke to Jubei or Ryu and they told you to proceed in my absence.

[2] You have your personality listed as both Lawful Good and "Passive Neutral" (maybe you meant 'True Neutral'?); nearly ALL of your listed personality traits conflict with Lawful Good and True Neutral alignment. If you're only looking out for yourself, as well as vain, as well as a womanizer, as well as naturally distrustful of others, you're leaning dangerously close to neutral evil, at best, chaotic neutral. If you wish to remain a Vizard, the likelihood of being pushed towards Evil is even greater.


[3] There is no 'typical vizard haori' as this site is completely non-canon; the fact that we go against many of the manga/anime's mainstays is precisely why I had Vizard's closed in the first place. At the very end of your history, who is this person that calls you a Vizard?

[4] Speaking of your history....it's absolutely incorrect. I feel for you, because you put a great deal of work into it, but I want you to think this out. Your 350 Years old. That means you were actually born in 1662. 1662. There are no highschool parties, or marines, or divorce, or America. Another reason why Vizard as a race is restricted is because of the attention to detail it requires; if you want to keep your history the way it is, you'll have to create a MUCH younger Shinigami, and you definitely wouldn't be old enough to have even mastered Shunpo, let alone your Shikai, Bankai, or even fight a hollow. Otherwise, the entire thing will need a revamp.



[5] The blade-in-the-sandal thing is a nice touch, but, i think you're forgetting something else. You're a spirit. Having a two inch long steel blade is going to do absolutely nothing to 99.9% of the creatures/spirits you'd be in combat with.



[5] As far as disliking Arrancars; you wouldn't even know they exist. No matter how you re-write your history; you will not be Kenpachi Zaraki style slaying your captain as an unseated member of the division through sheer awesomeness and simply becoming a captain in their place; meaning you are not privy to information regarding arrancar. You'd essentially never have heard the word before, and wouldn't know what one was even if it was standing in front of you.

[6] You list your hair as being light brown, all the pictures you've linked confirm this.....and then you write a paragraph about his hair being a 'white-silvery' color. Please pick one.


[7] I'm not against you having the baseline talent/affinity for determining whether or not another person is lying. That's fine. But understand this; any demonstration of this ability will HAVE to be RP'd out completely. What i mean is...DO NOT use this ability IC with someone who say, tells you an alias, and then you magically know that its an alias (i.e., you go look at their profile), and put forth no effort into actually learning it. We will treat the acquisition of any type of extraneous information like this the same way we would treat using a technique in battle; the other character you RP with will determine exactly how much you can get out of them. Why? Because otherwise, this is just a gigantic metagaming tool. If you're asking questions, RP'ing OUT watching for facial clues AS WELL as actually analyzing them with clearly communicated deductive reasoning, great. I'm all for it. Any abuse of this, and we'll put a stop to it.


[8] You say your eyes are typically shielded behind your visor. Why? You can't roam around wearing your Vizard Mask all day (And once the technique indexes are complete, then you'll have a clearer understanding of the time limits on such things).

[9] Allergic to animal fur? You're a spirit. You're not breathing. You don't have nasal passages or sinus cavities or lungs. Remove that. With alot of these personality traits/characteristics (I'll admit, the My Little Ponies part made me chuckle), it seems they're thrown in to give it filler/be funny. While i'm not against making a comical profile, some adherence to the logic established by the manga/anime would be nice. You don't have to remove everything; keep the bulk of it; just remember, you're not a living person, so certain things, such as allergies, won't apply. If you wanted to make it a completely psychological thing, like some odd mental tick that makes him think he's still allergic to animals and has him act like a nutter when he's around them, that's fine.

[10] Remember your race is Vizard, NOT Shinigami. As such, you probably wouldn't like Shinigami very much, as a vast majority of them would be instructed to kill you on site, or be compelled to due to your dual/hollow reiatsu.

[11] Same thing mentioned in #9 goes for being a germaphobe. You're not human man. You can't 'get sick' or 'catch anything'. Dead guy is dead. Would make absolutely no sense to be afraid of germs its literally impossible for you to come in contact with. Again, if you want to keep this as a purely psychological thing, then at least word it so that it makes sense. At some point, someone would be like 'hey dude....you're a friggin ghost.' and the fear would dissipate. If there's some comical/serious reason why he wouldn't realize this, then please state that.



[12] As for your ability; its got confusing wording compared to how clearly laid out everything else is; so I'd like you to clarify some things for me. This is only an illusion? Meaning; this ripple effect is purely visual? So an opponent who can simply sense your reiatsu without having to look at you will be unaffected? Where does the ripple occur at? Is this around the sword? Hilt/blade/his entire body? How far does it spread out? I need some indication of exactly what this DOES to an opponents senses, making your movements 'hard to see' will be overcome fairly quickly without elaboration. I'd suggest something like; makes it impossible for an opponent to aim at a specific body part of yours, or land a focused attack to any area where the rippling occurs, for a specific (small) amount of time with each ripple. Naturally, that would increase as your skill with the ability increased. Something like that. Just a bit more specific. And the area where it says Shikai: Technique replace the word "Technique" with the name of the technique, which would be 'Ripple'.

[13] I would say hold off on counting out your Exp, because we're not even through putting all the necessary techniques into indexes. Im glad to see the initiative and the interest though. So make some adjustments and get back to me. If you have any questions, comments, or concerns, you can PM any of us and get help.

-N

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First off Thanks for readin it out, Second, Holy shit you read the WHOLE THING Q.Q

1) Sorry broski, Ryu had no quarrels with it, so i just leaped in, didn't know i needed more then his approval to go on, once more sorry for missing that

2) Changed like a babies diaper, i obviously got ditracted there, once more sorry (Long nights x.x they get to you)

3) Gone, the second part is explained in (4))

4) Its all good, ill change it all up to say Spanish Expedition? Or perhaps a slave in the East India Trading company, you'll see when i grab enough muse to change it Blacksmith caught in a pirate pilage, at the end it is a NPC character that i am slowly making, it is -Through much plottage- going to end up being his Zan after he gets turned. For now its just a Voice in the back of his mind, though if i got to far it wouldnt be nearly as cool as ALL the plottage i have to go through for others to figure it out.

5) S'ok, i still want to stab some shit, no matter how "ineffective"

5.5?) zappled(gone)

6) Hrm Derping alot i have, changed, i believe.

7) I dont even remember writing about "Lies" or any affintiy like that, "Ripple" is his only technique but i understand the full responsibilies, and will NOT meta-game(Atleast to a high extent)

8) LOL not his Mask, i believe i stated he wears a Visor in his appearance, it is supposed to be light brown, similar to his hair in the fashion of one you may see, on a dealer in a casino.

9) Ill zap that but the other one is something he was to pick up in his human life...

10) His history really only goes up to Becoming Vizard, and at most learning what he has become from a conscious source/basic Vizard mask use. So he is still "Unaware" of the hpossible hatred out there, this will be Rp'ed out with one of the first Shini's that are created.

11) Well we cant ALL have OP'ed beast Aizen's running around with NO quirks or anything can we? I added this in as a mere example that everyone on this site, and all the other rp sites, that we dont need to have perfect characters, in all its just something he picked up in the human world, and he has yet to shake it.

12) All durn

13) NP

14) Thanks alot bro, didnt think anyone would bother to check for -weeks-